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Title: Rain
Setting - a boy met a same age girl and they love each other but one day she die.
Characters - Boy: He live farm and he met a girl and love her
Girl: She lived city but her parents wants to move farm that's why she live with her grandparents and her first friend is a boy.
Plot - One day there was hard rain and the boy went to girl's house but she died already.
Suspense - there was hard rain
Theme - because the title shows important word in the story
2 comments:
Very good, Paul! I will give you the corrections of your work later. Very good! + 5 points on your homework!
Setting - a boy met a same age girl and they love each other but one day she die.
Emery: Please check the definition of setting from your notes. A setting describes the time and place when/where the story took place.
Characters -
Boy: He live farm and he met a girl and love her
Emery: He lived in a farm where he met the girl he fell in love with.
Girl: She lived city but her parents wants to move farm that's why she live with her grandparents and her first friend is a boy.
Emery: Rewrite this.
Plot - One day there was hard rain and the boy went to girl's house but she died already.
Emery: (correction) One day, in the middle of the heavy rain, the boy rushed to the girl's house. He discovered that she was already dead, to his utter sadness.
Suspense - there was hard rain
Emery: I don't think this is the part which heightens a reader's curiousity. Read your notes again
Theme - because the title shows important word in the story
Emery: What was the story all about? Was it about love? How can you compare it to your personal experience?
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